Loneliness Abated For A While. A Poem  

yesmamallthetime 51F  
2359 posts
1/12/2019 12:58 am
Loneliness Abated For A While. A Poem


He was a mirage
In her deserted heart.
An illusion
That she built up.
When reality
Assumed it's role
That had been uncast
The illusion burst apart.
Leaving the empty
And deserted heart again.
Did she regret
His appearance altogether?
No because he made
For some carefree days
Loneliness abated
For a while
As he catered to
Some of her whims
Which provided amusement
For the both of them.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


yesmamallthetime 51F  
9720 posts
1/12/2019 1:02 am

He provided something. For a while.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


Paulxx001 61M
5160 posts
1/12/2019 5:06 am

Well... I guess, amusent for a short while is better than nothing... 😐

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scoupe42 55M  
5170 posts
1/12/2019 5:29 am

Well, he gave you a little happiness.


HermanG67 51M
6115 posts
1/12/2019 7:27 am

we can not regret or change what we dream


yesmamallthetime 51F  
9720 posts
1/12/2019 7:42 am

    Quoting HermanG67:
    we can not regret or change what we dream
Herman, I am so glad you are back and commenting on my blog. Your comments make me feel warm and like a hug is given. I don't know how you do it but you do. I really appreciate what a decent and kind human being you are. Hugs!

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


yesmamallthetime 51F  
9720 posts
1/12/2019 7:43 am

    Quoting Paulxx001:
    Well... I guess, amusent for a short while is better than nothing... 😐
Thank you Paul. I greatly appreciate your comments. They are reasonable and kind. ☺️

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


yesmamallthetime 51F  
9720 posts
1/12/2019 7:45 am

    Quoting scoupe42:
    Well, he gave you a little happiness.
Yes, he did for a few days. I am not sure if I will ever have any longevity in the happiness department. Thank you Scoupe for your comment. ☺️

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


rick315875 60M  
6056 posts
1/19/2019 2:19 pm

my own little take on your poem

his heart
was a desert
sand and wind
a hot sun
burning down
creating
a thirst
a hunger
for life

his heart was
the vacuum
the emptiness
of space
with only distance
between him
and all else

. . .


yesmamallthetime 51F  
9720 posts
1/19/2019 3:38 pm

    Quoting rick315875:
    my own little take on your poem

    his heart
    was a desert
    sand and wind
    a hot sun
    burning down
    creating
    a thirst
    a hunger
    for life

    his heart was
    the vacuum
    the emptiness
    of space
    with only distance
    between him
    and all else
I am not sure about his heart. I did not see it for very long.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


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